having spoken to my tutor about my personal statement it seem I have a lot to change on my statement. the review he gave me where; I am not going straight to the point with what I am trying to say, some of the paragraphs doesn't make sense or connect with the next paragraph. I didn't talk about my real strengths and weaknesses. I didn't specify what course I was applying for.
we went over the first two paragraphs and made some changes. after having this tutorial with my tutor really helped me understand what and how I needed to structured my paragraphs and what needed to be in each paragraph.
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